Story telling (development of project)

My dissertation covers the topic of narrative structure, allowing me to discover ways of developing a narrative that is explored by characters. For the development of my practical, I have started to create a simple narrative that involves two characters, both representing the two roles I'm focusing on, being the Hero and Villian.

So far I'm using the knowledge I've gained from my research and I'm trying to identify how each character fits the role they act. this is the development so far:

As seen, the characters are undergoing a new style that I'm undertaking to understand values in greyscale, as I want to expand my knowledge as it will help with my understanding of colour theory. this was inspired by Sycra, a concept/character design artist on Youtube.

The characters designs are inspired by fantasy warrior types, I hope the characters develop alongside the narrative I create. As inspiration for the narrative structure, I have looked at the Lion King made by Disney and have picked out the most important parts that both the hero and villain act out. and am trying to incorporate the logic into their traits.